All Comments on 'The Bag Lady and the Domme Ch. 01'

Very intriguing story, very much look forward to future installments. One small suggestion -- I'd be careful not to overdo the metaphors and similes in the story. Sometimes they got to be a little much, such as this one: "I was that dormant volcano on a Pacific atoll that just needed an underground test nearby to upset the equilibrium. Everyone had run for their lives and I was now alone, feeling the seismic pulses."

loved it the best story i have read

loving this one