All Comments on 'The Ball Boy Experiment Ch. 03'

by SamClayborn

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dnsontndnsontnabout 2 years ago

Great to see you continue the Experiment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So Sam is the horned viper?

queerakqueerakabout 2 years ago

A bit odd to talk about not being able to read in a dream and then have multiple plot points emerge immediately afterward that rely on…reading in a dream. 😬

Dry_opinionDry_opinionabout 2 years ago

+1 to the previous comment.

Maybe if there were signs in real life (e.g. weird behavior between teammates) or other premonitions before the dream, that MC could not understand. It would've made sense for a dream to provide explanations.

Having major plot points appear in a dream out of the blue seems random.

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