All Comments on 'The Bank Heist'

Very well done, and hot, too. Five stars. ~~ JB Edwards

erotic - yes, nice to read - yes, but plot does give mixed signals. Are the robbers just a bit stupid or lazy, ie lacking in prep (crucial info gap on vault time lock should not happen for pros)? Are the robbers just passing time, until the timer opens the vault or is there another motive?

Anyway, sex on the job doesn't look professional even for criminals. Might leave too many traces. As does the name calling - except if Ferguson was a pseudonym.

Hope the sequels are as fun to read and do complete loose plot line ends.

making babies while trying for a loan. TK U MLJ LV NV

enjoyed reading !! Try adding a female robber character. Would be fun.

Are you going to add a part two?