All Comments on 'The Bar Pickup'

by Steifer_Junge

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Blond

Its Blonde

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
There are native

speakers, whose grammar or spelling is far worse...

So don't harass 'Steifer_Junge' for minor bugs.

DessertmanDessertmanabout 1 year ago

It has been done many times before, the pickup is either the husband or the wife. However it was well written and held my interest to the end.

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