All Comments on 'The Bartender Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good start but needs a lot more.

I want to see what happens next, did she just change or the world with her, also i would like to read about how she acts with women now how she treats them and her daughter. Plus more stories from the bar, who else gets changed. I would like a story hoe a good girl becomes an utter trash talking slut, but not a lesbian.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Do this will end up different than the one that already in EMCSA?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonderful storytelling

It was a good read. I enjoyed reading as her prespective changed with each suggestion. And finishing with her turning to being a strong dominant butch was a very hot choice. Would enjoy reading about such a tranced individual pegging guys and transexuals.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Stupid....

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