All Comments on 'The Beach Ch. 01-03'

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LJScottLJScottover 2 years agoAuthor

I’ll publish the next chapters shortly.

LadyJudoka19LadyJudoka19over 2 years ago

The ending of chapter 3 was very hot, but Hannah was right, Peter was practically playing with fire by sneaking up on her like that, but at least she knew it was him, otherwise he'd be folded like an origami swan and tasting floor right now. Still though, I'm glad to see this story is taking a CMNF route like your others too.

MetaBobMetaBobover 2 years ago

"I’ll publish the next chapters shortly." As someone who has four stories with female martial artists, at least two of whom have black belts in multiple disciplines, I offer my sincere compliments and I look forward to your next chapters.

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