All Comments on 'The Beast Within'

In my dreams ..... fun ..good job!!

Hmm daughter might be having a baby shower for dad

****The old thunder storm trick!! works every time. Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

Great read. 5 stars.

Part 2, please!

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Enjoyed the development. Would like a sequel. They keep hooking up? Baby on the (oops) way. Loved the ending with tires gift.

Good start. Couple things, his girlfriend helped with the Shower, where did She go? Spelling, and dropped words are vey distracting, fix it before more chapters. Solid 3 stars.