All Comments on 'The Beginning'

by normique

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
The beginning

Please continue this story,,,,sounds sweet

Uncle South LoopUncle South Loopalmost 20 years ago
I'll second the first commenter's request

I'm waiting and watching for the continuation of story

rpsuchrpsuchalmost 20 years ago
Why 2 years?

You left way more unanswered than you told us. Why not divorce? What was the basis for the relationship, just sex? Why did it end?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
So beautiful, it seems so real.

This story was so beautiful, so bittersweet. It reminds me of my life. My husband is like this, but I cannot leave because I have two small children.

I met a man like this, but he cannot leave for his own reasons.

We live so far away, but we find ways to be together. Being with him once every few months is worth being with my husband for a whole year.

Maybe the story ended with telling us about a two year affair because the affair hasn't ended yet for the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
better and better

one day I'll write of a woman met on the internet i fell deeply in love with. I'll remind her of an 'ode to her'

EjcksnEjcksnover 17 years ago
One Great Story

Visit Literotica, and you'll find that Normique is one of their best Authors. I've read this story so often that I feel like I know her. Normique, I salute you, but not with my hands, LOL.

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