All Comments on 'The Beginning'

But at least it leaves me wanting more! Great job.

Wow…….. you painted a wonderful picture. I hope we get to see more!

Great for your first submission - I'll definitely be awaiting your next submissions.

Short and abrupt it is but hoping for more.

Congratulations on an excellent little tale of sensuality. You write very well, with an excellent--and unfortunately, a rare--command the fundamentals of good writing. Good grammar, usage, syntax, spelling and punctuation are present throughout, and the erotica is realistic and exciting. All in all, a fine effort and clearly deserving of a five star rating. Please do continue your good work and compose more stories. Btw, the pic on your profile is outstanding!

I can only pray that the Starbucks you're heading to is the same one that I am almost at hahaha great first time looking forward to seeing more from you . I get the privilege to watch and help my friend she love's the whole process as much as you when she shaves and also describes how erotic it is for her , and how wet she gets .

Your readers await you. If you can write this well and set such good scenes, we need more. It helps that your bio pic is so incredibly hot too - those nips ....

This is such a great start and I only wish that I would be sitting across from you when you arrive at Starbucks. A shot of a neatly trimmed vagina from under a short dress would be more invigorating than the dark, hot liquid that I would be consuming at Starbucks. Please continue!!!

I think you meant sight!

A very sensual story. I would love to hear you digress some more and in greater detail.

OMG I loved your story - but want more. Nicely & well written. I loved your photo - dreaming of feeling those perfect breasts & licking & sucking those hidden nipples. Keep the stories cumming.

Loved the story, the digression, the sexy mind you revealed, and even the other comments, many as breathless as mine. You have a rapt set of readers, eager for more. Success! And thank-you!

Love the splash of deep pink. Mmmm mmmm. Thus my research begins to delve into a female writer’s perspective. I’m glad I started here.

Your personnel grooming I think I hear a pin drop at your suggestion of it. I'm so glad you can take your time. My yard work is the same, I have the time to do it right. Mowing the lawn I like to start around the perimeter being thorough and compleating my task right down the center. Then its on to trimming the hedge & bush I don't like using shear's I prefer just hand clippers being careful not to cut to close to the center using my left hand and thumb as a guide. Finally a thorough inspection of my work with some equally through water play to finish up. Nothing is quite as satisfying as grooming the bush.

If I might add, a absolutely stunning bio.

A equally sensuous writing ability.