All Comments on 'The Best of Friends Ch. 02'

by ShimmeringGloss

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pervynagakingpervynagakingover 3 years ago

The sex is smoking as ever, really good stuff.

And I like the hint of conflict in Catty, but I feel it's quickly resolved in order to stick to the "gobliness mind controls a man" trope; which is not bad at all! But there's potential for some deeper characterization here that I hope gets explored in future installments, if there ever are more.

SatyrDickSatyrDick9 months ago

[16.08.23]

As a man who married a woman of Mexican descent, I appreciate the Latin American touches...also as a surviving Roman Catholic - that ref is fun too.

11/10!!!!!

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