by ShimmeringGloss
The sex is smoking as ever, really good stuff.
And I like the hint of conflict in Catty, but I feel it's quickly resolved in order to stick to the "gobliness mind controls a man" trope; which is not bad at all! But there's potential for some deeper characterization here that I hope gets explored in future installments, if there ever are more.
[16.08.23]
As a man who married a woman of Mexican descent, I appreciate the Latin American touches...also as a surviving Roman Catholic - that ref is fun too.
11/10!!!!!