All Comments on 'The Best Summer Ever Pt. 01'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf5710 months ago

Very hot! Please continue the story so we can see what happens during the rest of the Summer. Five stars and a favorite point!

yangus99yangus9910 months ago

More please....

AlwaystabooAlwaystaboo10 months ago
Tender and sensual story of love

Mothers know when there is a taboo attraction. That heightens their attention to details concerning personal items. Beautifully written in content and mechanics.

live4thebjlive4thebj10 months ago

Good but should have kept going. On the fence between two and three. Feeling generous I gave you a three.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Waiting to know what all things they do together under the nose of her husband

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Let's hope she is gravning more babies as well!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

More please!

redlion75redlion7510 months ago

If dad ain't fucking her son needs to

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Promising debut. Looking forward to further chapters. Solid 5 stars

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey10 months ago

5 Stars. More please.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Loved it although no sex between mother and son you need to continue 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

wow111111111111111

yourkinkylibrarianyourkinkylibrarian10 months ago

this is - if start of a series, a very strong first part - and if not one hell of a story to introduce yourself as a new author! thx

MarkthegeekMarkthegeek10 months ago

Turned me ON!! The confidence that both Mom & son have is amazing.

Hope to read many more stories from you.

AdedrumAdedrum10 months ago

Brilliant first story please keep it up. Please however avoid lines such as “her hand moves to my smooth balls”. Better to say “she moved her hand to my smooth balls”. It’s a small point but I find this type of description grating if it occurs too often. Otherwise good writing and the subject is riveting for a smelly pantie fetishist like me!

I look forward to the mom exploiting her son’s fetish for both their fulfilment. Maybe introduce a friend of moms?

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