All Comments on 'The Bet'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 4 years ago

This pair is something else! I hope there are more chapters.

LenardSpencerLenardSpenceralmost 4 years ago
Equal?

A supposedly top Lawyer wouldn't take a bet with unequal outcomes. "Doing whatever he wanted, for a week" versus "making her lunch for a week". That's just ridiculous. Sorry to drag reality into a fantasy story but... really!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fantastic Start

I cannot wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good start

I think it’s a good start, we’ll see how this goes. Lol @LenardSpencer whose stories only consist of rape. Smh there’s always someone who has to be negative.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Unoriginal

This is an exact copy of a story called "A Week" even down to the workplaces for the characters. Come up with your own ideas. Disappointing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
“Greatly Inspired”

I’m a sucker for interracial romance stories particularly those in which the characters have some type of feud/rivalry between fueled by their hidden desires for one another. I’ve read many of the bwwm stories on this site and I have to say this story is GREATLY inspired by a previous story I read, “A Week” by May_I. When I began reading this story, I literally thought I had read it before and to some degree I apparently have. For those who loved this story, I highly suggest you read “A Week” and then read this story and tell me it’s not almost the same with a few very minor tweaks to make it seem original.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great start

I love your writing I wish you will publish I would definitely buy your books.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Plagiarism

Why would you steal someone else’s work and pass it off as your own?!

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