by freejack
if chapter 2 wasnt already available i probably would have rated this less than 5 stars. but my interest is piqued, my cock is hard, so it's on to chapter 2 i go!
You present a great visual read, please explore how both women are feeling about each other before the girlfriend seduces her boyfriend's mother more
. This story is one of the better written stories on this site. The ending, I believe should maybe bring us the unexpected... nice writing.
One of the best buildups I've seen in a while. Looking forward to the rest.
Great story but you left us hanging. Want to see how you seduce this older chick and get her to scream and cream.