All Comments on 'The Bet Ch. 02: The Challenge'

Can't wait for the next chapter

Enjoyed both stories. Particularly the last scene in the art galley. Hoping there will be atleast two more.

So very hot when he's in control.

You stopped it there?

Seriously?

I'm looking forward to your next installments, this is a very compelling story that is well written. Keep up the great work.

Most fun I've had on the site in a long time...keep up the good work

I like you profile picture! This style of writing is refreshing from the many disrespectful "loving wives" and "shame" stories where I often drop-out feeling disgusting....

I perfectly dig you change of "I" person, I love the build-ups...

Hoping to see chapter 3 way before march 2017! do not leave this one unfinished, please!

(why is it published duplicated? I thought it were a variation...)

Ya know, I'm not really sure why they have this story series duplicated on my profile. I thought it was a little weird and that maybe it was just a glitch I saw. Good to know everyone sees it. Thank you all for commenting, I've been messing around with multiple 1st person narratives. Trying to write a novel, so this writing helps me practice.

You can't leave that there!!! Really awesome story. Love the switching view points. Want to know the outcome of this bet!

When is the next chapter coming out? I need to know the end! Both chapters were very well written and I like that you switched view points. Also thank you for not using the same words and phrases repeatedly; I love that you were able to switch it up so it wouldn't get boring. Start typing!!

I'm enjoying your writing and look forward to more in this "The Bet"

Your one of a very few writers here that I have enjoyed. And enjoying the switching between the two in telling the story.

Thanks for sharing,

Really enjoyed this. Looking forward to the next installment. I hope it's soon.

I 'am in love with this story

Loving this story. Getting me going in a big way. Can't wait to read more.

I so desire to be the bejeweled female.

This story is superbly written.

The seduction is nicely paced and not too over the top.

What a fabulous way to wake though, trussed to the bed and just taken...... phew!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter

I'm loving the story the imagery is great I look forward to reading more

This is the best that I've had the privilege to read in a long time. You have a unique ability to spin your tale in a way that leaves the reader wanting, no needing more. Great job, can't wait to read more of your outstanding story, Semper Fi!

This is one H O T story! I read chapter 1 and immediately started Chapter 2...and now I feel like Im the one being tested lol my pussy is dripping and I want to cum so hard. Please keep writing!

This is great! Can't wait to read the entire series!

Dang, this is hot! You have me wishing I was the girl in this story! So hot . Very good writing.