All Comments on 'The Bidding of Lot 98 Ch. 02'

It's strange but I am really enjoying it, I hope you continue with this story.

You have an awesome imagination and the writing skill to express that imagination. I've just read Chap 1 and 2 and most certainly hope you get on with the story. Thank you!

...from the very first paragraph of the first chapter. I was glued to the screen until I finished reading the very last word of Chapter 2. That is how brilliant this work was. I cannot wait for another chapter. You are definitely in my favorites!!

I'd seen the other story and this got a lot deeper into the ccharacter's head whicch I thought was cool. Please write more!

<align="left">I've commented on this author's other recent stories, and obviously I like her work. At this point, it isn't enough to say that I like it, I need to say *what* I find good in it. <br><br>

There is a tremendous amount of erotica out there that you can get off to. But classic erotica is only incidentally sexy. Anyone can write a scene about people fucking. Erotica is meant to get into the head and throw those mental switches that really turn us on, those forbidden places that we don't like to admit to. Because fiction can bypass our defenses.<br><br>

This is not a piece of fuck-fiction. It is an exploration of the mind of a submissive slave. And some of it is very disturbing. Not much fuck-fiction talks about "geriatric albinos with a hare lip." We are seeing inside the mind and experiencing the fears of a woman who is giving herself over to submission.<br><br>

It is interesting to note that aside from stress, the duress in this piece is mostly psychological. The author does not rely on St. Andrews Crosses, fancy suspension rigs, but rather on the human mind for eros.<br><br>

What may be the cruelest moment is also perhaps the most important. 98 undergoes a symbolic rebirth into her new station. "Birth. It is a messy thing. Never clean. Never easy. The mother is exhausted, and the baby is filthy, squalling and fighting for breath, no?"<br><br>

The thing that struck me most about this work apart from its intellectual maturity was the chords it struck in regards to understanding the process of becoming submissive. Many of 98's thoughts reminded me heavily of passages from the essays in Guy Baldwin's "Slavecraft: Roadmaps for Erotic Servitude," The author captured a cross section of the fears and doubts that the Baldwin essayist describes so vividly.<br><br>

Those who don't like this piece probably don't like the idea of someone exploring a submissive mindset. But throughout history, in monasteries, military, and sexual slavery, humans have done just that, and it is a fascinating exploration. Many authors write about completed submission...pages and pages of the joy of devotion to master. How many realistically write about the fears, the conflicted thoughts, the self-criticism and doubt. How many let us see the imperfections and the times when the discipline does not hold and thoughts wander. This is a work to be prized.<br><br>

That said, I will observe that 98 has not yet really confronted the roots of her urge to submit. She has rationalized it in intellectual terms...that she is free of nightmares. She has recognized that she has submitted of her own free will. But she has not really faced her submission in a way that is not empirical.<br><br>

Her new master seems cruel and thoughtful. He clearly planned her arrival for maximum effect. One hopes that he will use those skills to dig into her and bring her to the core of her submissive instinct, and clearly this hope revolves around the wish that this author will continue to produce these well-crafted pieces of erotic literature.

I've only just recently gotten enough of an introduction to BDSM to recognize that it's something I'm very interested in, and I'm looking forward to getting a chance to explore it more at some point soon. Until then, though, I've been doing a lot of reading up on various forms of BDSM play and relationships, the kinds of things people get out of it, the protocols some people use... it's all really new to me, and I've always loved learning new things. But this and all the rest of your stories are the first things I've read that really make me feel like I can understand the submissive mindset-- reading your stories resonates with me on a deeper level than I'd expected. So, thank you, and I very much hope you continue writing and posting stories!

This is a good story and it's well written. Nice detail and I can tell you understand about what she's feeling. She's being treated harshly and you make us really feel how she's reacting. It really spoke to me. I wish I had something better to say but please keep writing these stories.

I normally don't read stories like this....but this one caught my eye. I hope you write the next part and soon...ty

Wow! This weekend was my introduction to this website and the material contained therein. I'd guess I read 25-30 stories from three or four of the categories. On several levels you've hit one out of the park!

1. You can spell! That talent seems a rarity here! You have a good command of grammar and an awareness that “there”, “their” and “they’re” are not synonymous!

2. 98 has been well fleshed out and you’ve given the reader just enough of a peek into her history to make her character quite believable.

3. The pace of the narrative is such that the reader’s attention gets very few opportunities to wander. I was but a short read into the story when I found myself jumping to Chapter 2 and counting the sections (pages). As I resumed the story I was constantly aware of the ever declining number of pleasurable experiences left before me! I await Chapter 3.

Oh, and you need not try to read my submissions. There are none. As I wrote, I'm new to this site and just submitted my first two items and they're still pending approval. I wish I had read your work first, however. I took my lead from other submissions I had read and relied more on suck 'n' fuck action and less space was therefore devoted to developing each character. A mistake I won't make again!

This was absolutely amazing. A submissive that I have been ... interacting with recently sent me this story, along with the words, "This is how I want to be treated. Only rougher."

It really puts a new mindset on things...speaking from a highly dominant male's point of view, this is.

What Belle & Sebastian album is it??!! I LOVE THEM

I enjoyed this. I only wish it went further. I see you are still writing. I’m looking forward to reading more of your work.