by Mudayo
Nice! I hope this one has a continuation. I kinda wanna see Steve's and Jackie's "relationship" develope some more <3
This was a mildly fun read, well put together, etc etc.
However it was unforetunately as typical as I thought it would be.
The problem with this kink is that the whole thing is getting stale, it's the same thing, time after time after time with no difference.
With what you gave us this piece was fine, but nothing that's not been done before.
I feel you and I totally agree with you. I myself stopped reading these stories for the same reasons. I try spicing things up with dirty talk and fucktalk but it is what it is. Some people are just desensitized now.
Didn’t like the ending basically saying she bullies other people and fucks them too, tbf.
Personally I wish she only had eyes on him and that they could work up to a real relationship, since she seemed to find him pretty attractive and her lack of real friends could have had them develop into a loving relationship.
Oh well, still a pretty ok story. Keep up the good work.
Hot, I hope you one day write a sequel.
Could I suggest you do something revolving around a school dance for something?