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All Comments on 'The Big Day'

by Lady_Katka

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Bad grammar ruins a good story

Needs some grammatical edits, and maybe switch to a different category.

Mr_ExpositionMr_Expositionabout 13 years ago
Category Confusion

This seemed like a far better fit for nonconsent/reluctance than BDSM. Good story though, just would've preferred a better warning of what I was reading.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 13 years ago
Love if you continued this

May be the start of a beautiful friendship.

But don't have her marry the Tool she was going to.

Explore the new dynamic between these two, with no cuckolding getting in the way.

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