by Schaka
Why are you mixing mother's name? Alice and Anna, then back to Alice? I like your creativity and story details but switching character's name took down your one star.
Author went next level here. Plain and simple. Mother wasn't an ageless vixen Son had trepidations besetting him despite sibling rehearsal. All this portrayed very well. I'm only sorry more history wasn't mixed in but understand full well, , most readers are not here for that.
Full marks !
Buster2u- TY! Thx for 5 stars. we don't get paid so we write for your ratings
OOPS on the name mix up!
LordSlamdawgg_-TY so much! I like real people! I think they are more relatable. I read about the flood and decided to build a story around it
How high did the water get?they swam out of the hay loft of a barn which is usually 30ft off the ground.