All Comments on 'The Big Idea'

I liked this story a lot. Wasn't convoluted or heavy with emotions, just a fantasy, simple and easy. Writing was excellent and didn't notice any glaring mistakes, if any. Well done. Will look for more of your stories in the future. Thanks for sharing

Great story. I love the use that classic movie for the inspiration for her friends idea.

@anonymous thank you, I've been trying my best to keep my stories and not over the top, which can be hard to do.

@rutherford366 thank you. The movie didn't inspire this story but I couldn't help thinking about it later on while I was writing it so I decided to weave into this story.

Very enjoyable story. I liked how you got Jennifer to use compelling arguments to get them to sleep with each other, it felt very realistic. Most stories would've just had them getting together without question. Also, good use of the move The Big Chill. I also thought the same thing about that Harold/Meg situation, I laughed a little when you brought it up like that.