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Click hereWe did. Zofi is REALLY flexible - have I ever told you that? She was able to brace herself with one hand against the wall and do a full vertical split with one foot straight up in the air, like a true ballerina. It made entry quite easy, and I fucked the hell out of her that way. This time, she wanted to me to cum in her mouth as not to leak anything out overnight. I was happy to see her exquisite face sucking my schlong beneath the shower's spray as she swallowed every last drop of my sperm.
Finally, we crawled into Zofi's bed and spooned together, happily sated and clean. She'd even let me borrow her toothbrush. As I kissed the back of her neck and fondled her naked breast, I realized I'd finally had a first time with one of the girls that hadn't been a disaster.
Sam taking my virginity had been an ill-thought impulse that lasted only seventeen seconds and involved quite a lot of crying. Belle's deflowering had ended in abject misery and resulted in her walking funny for a week. Oh yeah, and more crying. Mari's date had gone comically wrong in the beginning, although it ended pretty well (tearful confession notwithstanding). And my first time with Naimh had resulted in Alice storming out and leaving the BTC for a month.
But today?
Today had been AMAZING.
Flush with that afterglow, I turned Zofi so she could pillow her head on my chest and asked, "How are you feeling?"
With a serene smile of utter contentment, she looked up at me with large, liquid blue eyes. Rubbing my chest, she murmured, "I've realized two things."
I wasn't expecting an answer like that, and I glanced down at her. "What do you mean?"
Taking a deep breath, she furrowed her eyebrows and stated evenly, "I'm going to Princeton if I get in."
Her words were like a hammer to my heart. I was surprised to feel it hit me that hard. I'd long known the BTC would more than likely break up eventually, but Zofi's pronouncement was the first confirmation from one of the girls that they would move away. I mean, she hadn't gotten in yet or anything, but I knew how smart she was, and she was a legacy applicant through her father, so the odds were good. I wasn't in love with Zofi or anything, but I did love her. And to realize that this very dear young woman with whom I'd shared such a special day would be leaving...
I mean, in all likelihood, Zofi would be drifting out of my life in just a few short months. I would MISS her. And I resolved to get a copy of that one close-up photo from the museum, the one with her looking at me with complete adoration.
I swallowed to fight back the emotions rising up my throat, and blinked away the moisture forming in my eyes. Taking a deep breath, I asked, "What's the second thing you realized?"
Zofi tilted her head up to search my eyes. And in a quiet but quietly certain voice, she stated seriously, "If you're willing, I want to have your baby."
- COMMENTS
pk2curiousabout 1 year ago2 weeks , 4 weeks whatever . This is fiction . Damn good fiction . And what errors ? Petty . The trademark morning blowjob is genius . Just like everything else .
Well done .
MADDOGINTEXASalmost 2 years agoThis chapter ALMOST received a (4)-I am seeing more "small errors" cropping up in the writing; I know the series is all written, but there is some ability to go back and edit.
I have to agree about the repetition, also; Matt gets woken up by a blow-job from whoever is his latest 'sleepover' partner, and he jams his cock into their throat because he is surprised(?!)
As to this chapter; the emotional aspect was really well done, and the date is well-described. Having Sam following and picture-documenting the stages was a god touch, will document for posterity for the whole group.
Zofi wants to get pregnant? Is this gonna be BEFORE or AFTER she goes off to school? And how does her mother feel about this (if she has been consulted)?? Also, really telling comment that Sam broke Zofi's hymen a year before; my opinion-both Zofi and Matt missed out on the "blooding" that accompanies a first time for most girls...I am a 'pervert and enjoy that kind of thing (but have never actually actively broken one mmyself!)
That ending leaves us ready for the next chapter...😀😱😈
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWOW. I did not expect that ending. But seriously, how do you come up with all this great stuff? So many of the ideas and characterizations are just spot on. The photos by Sam and the movie references were a great idea. And for the past few chapters I have loved the vignettes with Mattie’s mom. Just amazing.
Sorchakabout 2 years agoJust one thing, and that's Zofi should have actually waited longer than 2 weeks for her to lose her virginity, as that isn't really long enough for the pill to be effective. 4 weeks is recommended. If she wanted to be really sure, 6 would have been better. So she just might get her wish, perhaps earlier than expected.
