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sheeversheever3 months ago

great story ,an even better ending . cheers for that .

oldsage_1oldsage_13 months ago

Auh yes! Know the feelings well. Well done indeed!

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Needs another 1500 words. Good start.

DquiotiDquioti3 months ago

Oh, this one definitely deserves a follow up. Don't leave a guy hangin'.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy2 months ago

Oh, the dreams that old men have!

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

No, leave it as is. Let the readers finish it in their minds.

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I like to write and started writing erotica some years back as an exercise to improve my descriptions of things and actions. I guess I want to see if I have any talent at writing and to improve what little I probably do have.