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by BelleCanzuto

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ElectricBlueElectricBlueover 4 years ago

Goodness me, Belle, you're a naughty girl!

I don't know why you're wondering about the reaction you're getting. This one's a raunchy little smoker, fast and efficient. I can smell the room. Nice one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story!

What a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
No kidding

Best birthday ever!! Sounds wonderful.

Tess (UK)

WoodsLord_3540WoodsLord_3540almost 4 years ago
Great!

Your descriptive powers are excellent. You made us feel everything she felt. Very, very imaginative.

In the next chapters, please have her guys finish inside her. For me, that's hotter.

Thanks.

wasagadavewasagadave7 months ago

One of the hottest stories I've ever read! Great!

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Thank you all for your comments and your constructive criticism. I've just passed my third anniversary as a published author here, and it's definitely been a learning experience. Well worth it, every day. I haven't submitted new stories in a while, but I'm working on several. ...