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All Comments on 'The Birthday Surprise'

by ArabethMora

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nicely written and erotic story. Keep up the good work!

BigBeanieBigBeanieabout 2 years ago

Lovely set-up, very believable, but hasn't really delivered much in the way of actual exhibitionism or eroticism as yet. I've given it a five on trust that the payback for the slow start will begin to show in the 2nd instalment.

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userArabethMora@ArabethMora
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I love to write erotica rather than graphic details. The situation is everything to me and as a wise man once told me, there are only so many ways of inserting tab A into slot B If you're looking for a money shot, its probably better that you read something else