All Comments on 'The Bitches of Zulan'

Interesting concept. I think you should use “bitch” more though. I spotted two sentences without it.

Loved this story! Now I'm wondering how horribly the Mbedi train their slaves for Maisi to be so desperate.

You have a knack for this! Hope to see more.

Jesus. Read this twice and came twice in the same session. Can't wait to read more of Kai and his bitches.