by EddieFuggles
Great narrative, plus remarkably good writing, easy to read. Thanks!
Hot... so hot.
But the end was kinda predictable.
Great story though.
Delicious hot reading, well said, described, and enthralling.
Some have almost wished for this type of change, and this describes the double edge consequences well. The lead-in enticement, the trapping, and the resulting consequences...WELL DONE, I LOVE IT!
I would have liked to have had more details about the events between the possessions and seen some more character development but for a quick read it was enjoyable.
The sentence 'Here come the tits and ass, baby!' made me laugh and I want to add it to my lexicon. Well done.