All Comments on 'The Blair Affair'

You did a great job writing both sex scenes in an erotic, but not sleezy, way. A very difficult thing to do - well done. Enjoyed reading about these two characters. 5 stars.

Well written and erotic story which was a pleasure to read. 5 stars. There were too many avoidable typos which break the flow, but using Word/Google Docs and Grammarly would catch them, and I can’t remove a star after enjoying your story so much.

Well written! It's nice to read a story where the sex is actually erotic instead of merely a by the numbers suck and fuck. 5 stars

So she never tells him her real name?

Started out as a very good story with an interesting story line and plot, then just devolved into sex and more sex. 'How is that bad?' you ask? It's because this is not just erotica, it's literature also. And if the story gets lost, then it's just another of a million 'stroke' stories. Maybe a part 2 could find it again??

Excellent story, and an amazing connection between the characters. I am really enjoying your writing.