All Comments on 'The Blonde in Black'

Thanks for sharing. Honest feelings, well described - I've seen her too

You paint such a vivid picture, especially in so few words. It really is a challenge to write a complete in 750 words, but you accomplished it beautifully. Well done.

This is 90% of the people at any gym anywhere. 5% more are people checking themselves out in the mirror. The rest are this women.

Great story.

And dream we do.

Well done sir! ;->

Really really well written! Vivid and honest feelings! Fantastic story.

I’ve seen her, too. We’ll done!

Skilfully done, sir!

I don't go to the gym, but I've seen her through the front window of one, blankly staring at...nowt!