by kittysaurus
The build up in anticipation of the story is very well written and described. You can really imagine the emotions and sensations that the character feels - and being bound with stockings! Well...!!
Gary
You've got a way with combining actions with story--showing and telling at the same time. I really enjoyed how you spun a tale and hooked me in early on; you had my attention throughout, and you certainly didn't fail to please. My eye snagged on comma splices and the like, but it didn't take away from quality. Excellent short!