All Comments on 'The Blonde Stranger'

Heady writing.

You've got a way with combining actions with story--showing and telling at the same time. I really enjoyed how you spun a tale and hooked me in early on; you had my attention throughout, and you certainly didn't fail to please. My eye snagged on comma splices and the like, but it didn't take away from quality. Excellent short!

The build up in anticipation of the story is very well written and described. You can really imagine the emotions and sensations that the character feels - and being bound with stockings! Well...!!

Gary