All Comments on 'The Blowjob at the End of the World'

Creative plot. I liked it. 4 stars.

Cute little funny story! I would guess it is a 750 word contest entry? Best I have read so far.

Nice to see you are still writing and sharing your talent with us your fans. I miss your work.

Cheers

SAGE

quite the finish baby...

That's what was missing in the new movie "Don't Look Up." A blowjob! Now I have to imagine Jennifer Lawrence giving a blowjob. BTW, in defense of scientists, such a calculation would not be that wrong, and it would be checked multiple times by many, many scientists. However, all's fair in fiction and love, so 5* from me.~~JB

Very well done!

Fun short story. Loved the end of the world concept.

The ending was funny, but I hope she does finish him off.

Well done, nice twist. Pent uo frustration. I expectthe butt sex will surely happen larer that night

fun ny story .. very good . would like to praise the story as a logged in follower

Well, it would be diificult for Roger to dance around and celebrate like everyone else in his "condition". lol I really enjoy stories like this and well-written, too. Thanks for sharing.

Find 'party' replace with 'blow job'. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zpLBDDGaMGM

Great story!

Best humor I've read since O. Henry!

good . funny . O'Henry (as per Whippet) would certainly have come up with a double barreled red herring double twist with pike ending .. but the ending was good because it is funny for the poor fool ..hehe!!

So funny but true. I would have asked the same thing!

The story works insofar as I’m probably wondering a similar thing as the guy: where’s the punch line or point of it? Okay, the guy might be a little flustered by the pent-up release, but that he cares more about cumming than the just thwarted end of the world comes across as rather tired to me, you know, the old, old joke about men thinking and caring about nothing else but . . . Not all that funny, methinks.

Apart from that the text is quite competently written, though I found the unnecessary doubling of “loud” and “loudly” in one sentence rather jarring for some reason. “Butt sex” strikes me as a rather queer word choice too in the situation given, but I don’t know, it might have been intended to be funny too. Didn’t work for me, alas.

—AJ

Great work, Melissa. Disneyland! Haha! And some may miss the satire of being more disappointed about the abrupt end than the aborted end of the world but that’s their loss. 5*.

Roger should have turned the sound down on that live news report until the eagle was set free.

Funny, typical guy response at the end!

This is fun and nicely written, although the combination of Mozart's Requiem and lusty sex is a conflicting concept (for me, at least), and no way could scientists' calculations be that wrong...

Not with a bang but a whimper!

5

Too funny! 😂

Hey, a man's got to have his priorities. LOL I actually misinterpreted the title. I kinda thought, "end of the world" was something like "end of the road" or "end of the tunnel". Didn't think it was literally the end of the world. Not a complaint, my bad.

Hell yes! The orgasm at the beginning of eternity! Get with it, girl! It's a family tradition. God started it all with a Big Bang. Lol.

Roger has his priorities. No guy I know ever turns down a free BJ.

Apparently the author is an optimist! It's doubtful all the astronomers and astrophysicists in the world would get something so critical to life on THAT wrong. :o) Optimism is good. 3 stars

It's funny 'cause it's true. Exactly any man's reaction.

Damn, that was funny! And unexpected!

Good question!