by HeyAll
A very erotic and exciting story. I would like to read more about these characters. In particular I'd like to read a scene between Meredith and her secretary and Lisa involving lots of spanking and whipping.
A little too long. A lot of build-up before the eroticism. Well worth the read
A real knickers-dampening story, if ever I read one! Very well done and thank you for posting. Five stars, and more like it, please ;) !
Very very good stuff... I love the natural process of Lisa slipping into the submissive role. The struggle between pain and pleasure was really, really, well done, and its exactly how I like it :3
I look forward to reading more of your stuff!
HeyAll, I really enjoyed your story. I thought it flowed nicely and the characters were interesting and you left a lot open for future story lines. As far as the comment of being too long, I liked the story exactly as is. The story built up to the action perfectly and the "action" was perfect!
I loved it, a wonderful build up that led nicely into the hot eroticness (i made that word up but it works for me! Or i spelt it wrong!!) that made me want to read more!
A beautiful writing style with characters who took on lives of their own.
So hurry up and write more, I've left 5 stars as encouragement.
The build up from the shy photographer to the slutty bitch isn't something everyone can manage. Nice fucking
Oh God, why didn't I find you long time ago and wasted time on other mediocre writers? I've read just two of yor stories so far and I'm hooked forever...
A beautifully told story very believable, loved the progress to being submissive.
5* and want more of the same. Add to my favourite authors so will be following you.
Wonderful party hope you come. I was reminded of a movie, Eyes wide shut. With a wonderful mansion full of masked and lovely nude woman. Nicole Kidman, does a movie need anyone more.
This is truly a tittilating & arousing story - great description of each scenario.
Oh my such a great story of how a woman loves the activities from afar till she needs more. The power of BDSM has gotten to her and she truly becomes the sub to Meredith an both I hope enjoy a long eventful sexual time together the story was so hot - thank you