All Comments on 'The Bondage Hour'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Top Marks

A very erotic and exciting story. I would like to read more about these characters. In particular I'd like to read a scene between Meredith and her secretary and Lisa involving lots of spanking and whipping.

StrangeViewStrangeViewover 9 years ago

Oh I did enjoy that, very well done!!

SV

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

A little too long. A lot of build-up before the eroticism. Well worth the read

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 9 years ago
Very nice indeed!

A real knickers-dampening story, if ever I read one! Very well done and thank you for posting. Five stars, and more like it, please ;) !

ClaraBara616ClaraBara616over 9 years ago
Whats the emoticon for lip biting?

Very very good stuff... I love the natural process of Lisa slipping into the submissive role. The struggle between pain and pleasure was really, really, well done, and its exactly how I like it :3

I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

Apple_of_EdenApple_of_Edenover 9 years ago
Nicely Done!

HeyAll, I really enjoyed your story. I thought it flowed nicely and the characters were interesting and you left a lot open for future story lines. As far as the comment of being too long, I liked the story exactly as is. The story built up to the action perfectly and the "action" was perfect!

Shysub412Shysub412over 9 years ago
Wow!!

I loved it, a wonderful build up that led nicely into the hot eroticness (i made that word up but it works for me! Or i spelt it wrong!!) that made me want to read more!

A beautiful writing style with characters who took on lives of their own.

So hurry up and write more, I've left 5 stars as encouragement.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice job

The build up from the shy photographer to the slutty bitch isn't something everyone can manage. Nice fucking

masterslave00masterslave00over 9 years ago
Fantastic!!!

Oh God, why didn't I find you long time ago and wasted time on other mediocre writers? I've read just two of yor stories so far and I'm hooked forever...

sober71sober71about 9 years ago

A beautifully told story very believable, loved the progress to being submissive.

5* and want more of the same. Add to my favourite authors so will be following you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
WELL DONE.

Fantastic job AGAIN !!! Thank you.

lowkeyonelowkeyoneover 8 years ago
WOW

Bloody fantastic again.

maddictmaddictalmost 8 years ago
Yes

Wonderful party hope you come. I was reminded of a movie, Eyes wide shut. With a wonderful mansion full of masked and lovely nude woman. Nicole Kidman, does a movie need anyone more.

Posy_ChurchgatePosy_Churchgatealmost 7 years ago
Jackpot!

This is truly a tittilating & arousing story - great description of each scenario.

zazrix9zazrix9over 6 years ago
OMG

after some more pleasurable stimulation, I want the sub to pleasure me

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh my such a great story of how a woman loves the activities from afar till she needs more. The power of BDSM has gotten to her and she truly becomes the sub to Meredith an both I hope enjoy a long eventful sexual time together the story was so hot - thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story.Thanks

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