by HeyAll
Oh my such a great story of how a woman loves the activities from afar till she needs more. The power of BDSM has gotten to her and she truly becomes the sub to Meredith an both I hope enjoy a long eventful sexual time together the story was so hot - thank you
This is truly a tittilating & arousing story - great description of each scenario.
Wonderful party hope you come. I was reminded of a movie, Eyes wide shut. With a wonderful mansion full of masked and lovely nude woman. Nicole Kidman, does a movie need anyone more.
A beautifully told story very believable, loved the progress to being submissive.
5* and want more of the same. Add to my favourite authors so will be following you.
Oh God, why didn't I find you long time ago and wasted time on other mediocre writers? I've read just two of yor stories so far and I'm hooked forever...
The build up from the shy photographer to the slutty bitch isn't something everyone can manage. Nice fucking
I loved it, a wonderful build up that led nicely into the hot eroticness (i made that word up but it works for me! Or i spelt it wrong!!) that made me want to read more!
A beautiful writing style with characters who took on lives of their own.
So hurry up and write more, I've left 5 stars as encouragement.
HeyAll, I really enjoyed your story. I thought it flowed nicely and the characters were interesting and you left a lot open for future story lines. As far as the comment of being too long, I liked the story exactly as is. The story built up to the action perfectly and the "action" was perfect!
Very very good stuff... I love the natural process of Lisa slipping into the submissive role. The struggle between pain and pleasure was really, really, well done, and its exactly how I like it :3
I look forward to reading more of your stuff!
A real knickers-dampening story, if ever I read one! Very well done and thank you for posting. Five stars, and more like it, please ;) !
A little too long. A lot of build-up before the eroticism. Well worth the read
A very erotic and exciting story. I would like to read more about these characters. In particular I'd like to read a scene between Meredith and her secretary and Lisa involving lots of spanking and whipping.