by HeyAll
I don't usually like stories which have a slow build up like this, but your writing style kept me enthralled until the end. A good story.
I'll have to find a dry pair of knickers, you wicked man! What a sexy, five star plus story! Loved it -- thank you
Loved the story hope you write another chapter when she takes the mask off and some one knows her
What a fantastic story!
Though I was never doubting where it would end - I loved being taken there!
Give us some more!
Loved the story. Would love to see a few more chapters detailing her continuing journey into this new world of pleasure through submission.
for continuation. She is a great character and her journey could be very entertaining. I enjoyed this very much.
Five stars are definitely not enough. I hope for a next chapter with a possible role switch, for example her being the lesbian sub.
I met the dom who would later become my husband in a bdsm club.
So this one struck a personal chord with me.
Thank you fr d story.
5 stars. Write more
-c
Would like to think there are more chapters to follow. Any chance of this..?
Well worth 5*. Jules.
Why did it end, I wanted more BDSM for Julie with Louis, that should have been the beginning
This is another good one. I agree it could have gone on for another page. I'm sure Louis could of given her a nice spanking! :)
We have one word to perfectly describe this story...
HOT!
Thank You.
There are so many stories on this site that claim to be BDSM but are often the exact opportunity. Yours was very well written and was very definitely BDSM, even if Louis was pushing early on, after all he really shouldn’t have led her naked through the club before giving her the mask. The outcome would still likely have been the same.
The sexual freedom achieved through BDSM is like a breath of fresh air.
Tess
Another great story HeyAll. The situation believable and a breath of fresh air in a genre abused by non consent material.
Louis knew what he was doing. Julia had to convince herself, to participate, but deep down she knew as well.
Great story