All Comments on 'The Bonding Chronicles Ch. 03'

Story is coming along great. Looking forward to reading more.

annony is just an old fat ugly fag fool.

Looking good. Ignore thing 1 and thing 2

Great story so far and I'm looking forward to more chapters.

I was willing to overlook the weird excessive precum/wetting himself angle, but adult diapers is just too strange a fetish for me.

Another good chapter. Keep it building.

Five stars again, looking forward to the next chapter.

I figured, due to the nature of the site, that people would assume it was a fetish thing. Its purely functional, and is never used sexually. Diapers will not appear in the story for more than a couple of school days.

Thank you for sharing your story with us. I'm enjoying the pacing, especially the glimpses of sexual energy between Andrew and Sara.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter :-)

It's taking awhile for this story to become interesting. I'm really sick of the MC being a sissy, and I don't like tht Sara & Andrew don't really mind the demeaning things tht are said/happen to Andrew. I really think this story has potential, I'm gonna keep reading with the hope tht Andrew grows some balls. Oh, and Andrew better be a badass were.

These need to come faster. Waiting almost a month for a new installment is just cruel and unusual punishment.

Any idea when we can expect the next installment?

I am trying to publish them about 2 weeks apart. That gives me time to maintain progress on these stories as well as a personal life. I am finishing up reviewing Ch 4 with my editors and should have it submitted this weekend. Once its submitted we are all in the tender mercies of the site moderators.

PP, This story is adictive and just like any good book I cant stop once I start reading the first line, then sit and watch and wait for your next post. A really good story just outside the box and that is what makes it special. I hope Andrew learns some good self defence/attack methods from Mr Spencer, then lets see the bad guys take a hit or two.

now that Fae magik has been introduced we are heading off in new directions.

amount of PDA at and in the school. To display that much physical contact and affection is unusual.

Enjoying the story, pg. 3 about midway down: "Just as Sara's orgasm began to wain {wane} her eyes went wide..."

The part about the diaper is very stupid and a big turn off, did you have to emasculate him completely ?

The diaper was a device of convenience and necessity, and never had any sexual intent. Andrew's pre-cum production was so great, that he was forced to choose between staining his pants, with liquid that would turn whitish as it dried, or taking Sara's advice and using the diaper to catch and conceal the fluid.

Perhaps you would have chosen to live with the stains, or carried around a ton of extra clothes in the hopes that you would have time to change your pants/underwear. Andrew did not feel emasculated by needing to use the diapers, he was just afraid of being teased/bullied if the other kids found out, but the risk of that was better than the certainty that stains would start showing on his pants.

I'm curious, why do you feel like an adult diaper would be emasculating? I had a friend in high school who had a medical condition that required him to wear them, and he had a hose coming out of his side because he had to hook himself to a machine every night. It was all just part of his existence, and some people teased him, but he was awesome and secure in who he was.

I sure hope that you don't wrap your masculinity in things like that. A lot of this story is about figuring out who you are, and being confident in that person. Andrew is a lot of things, but he always has a strong sense of self, and never lets outside forces change that.

Not liking the addition of the diaper.

It's hilarious how much that bothers people. It's a mechanic of convenience for the characters, and I believe in the very next chapter, it will get sorted out so that the diapers are never seen again.

Just push through, and all will be well.

PS: I am tempted to make all of the characters incontinent now, just to mess with everyone. ;)

RE: PantherParabola

05/23/17

Re Muadib89

Excellent response!

Those who have had experience either directly or indirectly with a loved one who have had medical situations can appreciate your work best.

seriously, you are making him sound like a dwarf by not specifying.

A lot of the specific character traits are mentioned once and then alluded to through vague descriptors, so I can understand your confusion as you get deeper into the story and only have people's reaction to base your later assumptions off of. That being said, his height was specified in the ninth paragraph of the first chapter:

"Andrew was 5’1” and 90 pounds, which for a 13 year old would be almost ideal, but Andrew was 18."

There is a female character introduced later who is five-foot even, and a lot of the time she is referred to in the story as the "small woman", or the "demure woman" and other such descriptors. I find it easier and more natural to describe events in these ways. It flows more naturally and gives the story an organic voice. We tend to think of people in these ways, and not with clinical, though accurate, heights.

Anyways, hope you are enjoying the story despite these minor setbacks.

I have to recognize that I haven't finished reading this chapter, but for some reason, it's starting to look like those stories with a weak male mc, that is bullied/is into serious debt, and when his woman tries to solve it, the bully says "if you want him to stay safe, become my sex slave". the tag "Forced orgasm" doesn't help to calm my fears.

In fact, I'm about to start looking into the tags and comments of the next chapters to make sure that doesn't happen

What fruits did your research yield?

the growing bond and intimacy (to say nothing of sheer sexiness) between Sara and Andrew. Thanks for Seth and the new friends he got in the cafeteria. It's wonderful to see a usually looked-over kid get a makeover like this. 5

Yeah yeah it's been covered but here's my 2 cents.

Yeah I dont think it fits well into the story. Hell if anyone in the school found out hed be toast. Now yes the authors comments are completely valid but unless Andrew is some animal that leaks massive amounts of precum (which most dont) them theres no way it would soak through underwear and denim Jeans.

Sometime the story is a bit jumpy/misses transition details. But hey that's what professional editors and writers are for. You doing great.

That's my only negative comments. The rest I'm loving so far.

Great story.

I am off to chapter 4 to see what happens next.

Thank you for sharing your talent.

Great story, very different.