by seareal
I like the reaction of the she-demon/Succubi, when our hero say or does something she least expect. This could be a beginning of romantic relationship between the two. LOL. His mother may have something to say about that.
I love the story so far, please keep going.
I would definitely love to see more.
Hey,
Please make more :) this is a really good series, I check it a lot.
The interplay of the "world views" is fun!
Tis is an awesome series, I am very excited for a third chapter, if there is to be one.if there isn't, I beg that you make one.
Please add more, way to many people start on this site with stories and never finish. Don't be one of them please.
Does he finally get his mom?
Can you please let us have the next chapter?
Thanks
We gonna havta wait another 6 months for another chapter to be posted?
Its just like your other posted stories & probably 2 years before we get the complete story here.
Sad. But at least you're consistent. The delays that is.
I like the story so far but sadly if the date of last update suggests anything is that there will not be any more updates of this story. Shame really... Looks like it could have been good one.
I am looking forward to part 3, you really got my mind going
Please write more. My hope is that you don't just stop this story and abandoned it. I've read allot of good stories but was disappointed that they were unfinished. This story is quite a good story because there's not many of this type and those that are suck.