All Comments on 'The Book of David Ch. 07'

you used those two awful phrases during the anal - "shitter" in this story and "poop chute" in a previous chapter. Please promise to never use them again! You make it all sound so hot, and then you go and ruin it with those two adolescent phrases. Seriously, very good writing. The emotional development of the characters is very good, although my favorite is still "A Different Kind of Family" for sheer emotional impact. Thanks so much for sharing your talent!

That was great. Its a really great story can't wait for Chapter 8

Loved it

almost definately the best series you've written and thats saying something; i've read all of them. Love this one. No idea how you are going to get 14 chapters out but i'm looking forward to it. The interaction has me hanging to the edge of my seat. Rating this a 5 hardly does it justice.

Wonderful epic. Thank you!

This is going to be a Lit Classic!! Truely one of the best I've read!

Still hating you for killing Ellie. 100% hot stuff

It's far more than just sex. The story is captivating and so easy to get caught up in.

I really like a good story and this is one of the best I have found. It is long and has believable characters.

I loved your John Billionaire series, and I still think nothing will ever top that, but this series may come close.

Very nicely done!

Thank you.

I've read this series before, and loved it. I recently decided to re-visit the whole lot, and still find the emotional rollercoaster ride that David has with Cherys, Amber, E-beth and the others in his life to be amazing. The gentle care that you, as a writer, have for these characters is nothing short of superb. It's no wonder that so many of your stories rate so well!

What's next, a romp with his sister, Cherys and what the hell, throw in Amber?

Too much happening too quickly, but is very hot despite the pace.

Whew ! I'm nearly exhausted reading about the sex between David & Cherys. The emotion that you generate with your writing is amazing. It's as if I were lying next to them watching every thrust & orgasm. Incredibly good writing. ❤️

Yes, now Danielle; with Amber and Cherys, David has his women, and I think one will have his baby (at some point, ¿sooner than later?)

So good, the emotion, the sharing..