All Comments on 'The Book of Lust 02'

Great chapter can't wait for part 3

Can't wait for what happens next.

So far so good, I hope Darius has time to get a bigger harem before he has to fight some gods. :)

It will be fun to read the next chapter of your story..

Too long between chapters of this story...

I'm not usually a fan of mind control stories but I like where this is going. There is really good character development and a very good plot. Well done! I will be reading other of your stories. It might not be your cup of tea, but I would find it interesting to read a story in this series with an orgy involving the main character, his partner, the goddess, and her husbands . . . maybe a little girl on girl and guy on guy.

A very nice read

Looking forward to more chapters soon! Thank you

Well done! I’m looking forward to reading more of this story! Thank you!

Glad to see you continuing this series! Please keep it up! I doubt you need suggestions but, perhaps Darius could learn the benefit of subtlety rather than brute force in his further conquests

Thank you and please continue your story The Book of Lust.. I enjoyed it immensely thanks again Darrell

Love the storyline as well as the sex. Excellent combination. Can't wait for more.

Loved it.

I look forward for your next segment! Sex, submission, danger, and so much more!

I really enjoyed the opening scenes of your tale.

I hope you feel compelled to continue, as I am compelled to know their fates!

The set up for an incredible amount of sexy, mind controlled fun is all there. The characters feels compelling and I can't wait till the next installment. So good!

You seem to have developed a bad habit of not finishing stories. Granted, given the content and free nature of the material I’m not trying to complain. I am hoping however, that you will eventually go back and finish out some of your other stories... Like TRANCE Inc. for example.

Here’s hoping, but you’re still a great author. Even if you do frustrate me a bit. ;-)

Please continue this story, it’s absolutely fantastic!

I really liked this series! Great writing as well. Looking forward to more of this series

I love it!

Please continue. Love where this is going.

Love it!!

Very Nice!!

This is going to be good...!

I am enjoying the plot development as well as the sex

Incomplete and won’t be finished.

waiting for next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Really liked it, I see there is a part three :) coming up as soon as I refill my drink.

Cheers

Just found the story - enjoying it, I see there is a part 3 but that is all there is... I can see this story could be developed and made a lot more interesting and lengthy. I like the never ending stories where the hero grows and becomes so much more

Great story! Thank You for writing it

Chapter 2 was great! On to number three!

Finish

Okay only two gods to kill, hhmm do I snap my fingers, wiggle my nose or cross my arms and blink (too many witch or genie sitcoms, lol.) Yes, another great episode for our hero learning to flex his 'muscle' and his harem learning to worship another of his muscles. I definitely look forward to reading how this progresses. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Gotta keep making these I love them

Keep going! Good stuff.

Ok, while I enjoyed chapter one, the second installment was definitely a step up. Better caliber of writing, dialog was more fluid, plot development. A+

Love it this is going to be a great saga can't wait for the next chapter

Want More !!!