by Tiestheknots
16" cock in an average sized vagina that would be 10" deep at the most. Stupid. Are you as young as you write? If so you shouldn't be on this site, it's reserved for those 18 and older. 1*
You need to learn anatomy. No one is taking 16 inches in a vagina. It would be in her womb, destroying her insides. It ruins the story.
Too much about the horses and not enough about the woman
What's white, hard, and 12" long?
Nothing
Keep it real and write again after high school.
I like this. Good first effort? It's very brief but extra spicy. Teases a forbidden subject without crossing the line. Yeah, 16 inches does seem unlikely but far from the most unlikely thing I'll read here today. Keep it up and don't let the naysayers hold you back.
Thanks for the feedback.
For those that have doubts about what a vagina can take, try pulling up your favorite porn website and type in "Mr. Hankey" in the search function.
Loved your "Thanks for the feedback" response above, Ties. Perfectly to the point. Touche! Now please continue when time permits.