All Comments on 'The Boss's Boss'

It takes a porn star to tame an overachieving female? Who knew? Nice job and 5*. JB

is there a part 2 ???

WOW! That was a blast. Please keep em cumming~

I loved your story, JJ. Wish I'd had a boss like that during my career. An erotic, arousing story. Five stars again.

You may be wondering why "Help" is the title of my comment. No, it has nothing to do with Hans being Jean's helper. It's related to your request for help to make you a better writer. If you still want help, pay attention to Strunk and White. I sent you their PDF. Your story is compelling as hell but very poorly punctuated and has other problems too. You may not care. But, if you do, Strunk and White are there for you.

Where did you send this? I didn't see it.

Great story and great writing!

Please write next part