All Comments on 'The Stronger Girl 03'

This is a great D/s story so far. I hope you keep adding to it. My only suggestion would have been that you ran this as 1 story w multiple chapters. It will make it easier for readers to figure out when they are looking at 40 different stories in a few years. :^)

5/5

J

Thanks so much for the friendly feedback.

I was very pleased to see that whoever approved this piece to be posted put my little intro into Italics (I STILL don't know how that is done). I also don't know how to chapterize (or reply to a comment) - I am not a dummy, but I am somewhat lazy. But if there is any sort of tutorial on her, I haven't found it.

My plan is to find an editor interested in working with me and to repost the stories sans-errors, but also as chapters to a larger story (which this has clearly become).

XOSNS

Love how Annie wants to just please Michele and gets pleasure from it.

Well, this certainly pushed all the right buttons for me. Thank you for sharing this very erotic little tale and I hope that you continue with Annie's story, she sounds like my kind of girl. Well done.

I have become smitten with (and protective of) Annie as this story has progressed, I didn't expect that when I started. (Not sure what I expected.) It makes me happy to know others are enjoying her as well. I have just been finishing part four and am finding her so much fun to write. Thanks for chiming in. It means a great deal.

XOSNS

One of the best new writers on the site. Stories are always enjoyable and well plotted, and the characterization is just spot-on. Very Well Done!

Yummy.

Wonderful. You have created the least toxic dom I have read, and because of that you’ve got all the angsty reluctance but haven’t created a victim in the sub. I actually like both characters equally.

That's lovely to hear Anon. I'm quite fond of Michele and have enjoyed trying to imagine her as someone worthy of Annie's devotion.

so far so good SNS. three chapters down and looking forward to the rest. I've immersed myself in your writings all weekend and don't know when I will be able to pick up the next chapter, but I will definitely have these two on my mind until then.

Great chapter I wondered where it was going but ended with one of my favourite things I could imagine myself in Annie's place looking up as Michele lowered herself down onto her face.🤔

There is a dreamlike quality in that the conventional apparatus is mostly absent. No classes, no interactions with professors, no meals described, just the relationships between the principal characters. Including Annie’s mother of course.

So glad I kept you guessing and then tickled your fancy Lynx_247. As for campus life _robin, tried to keep it present with just the loosest of gestures. To keep as much of the action as possible in the room, but I think that changes as we go on and Annie’s world begins to expand.