by queenicerink
An interesting and appealing little fantasy. It finished somewhat abruptly, so although there is no indication I take it that there will be more to come. It will be a pity if you just intend to leave it there. Five stars to encourage more.
"Oh, nymph, I am no man." -- I love that line! Good first story. Keep it up.
With the way this ended, both my wife and I hope chapter two is in the works. Great start!