All Comments on 'The Break Up'

Liked it, but it's too short!!

Where's the next part??

Very hot story kissing a girl with cum on her face is so hot

She's a keeper!

I enjoyed this story very much.

What a superb small piece. Alicia was certainly not what I expected.

Nice sexy story, turned me on, thanks for writing

outstanding short read...hot beyond belief

I can't believe this was a "one-off" story! Too good for that!

THIS was a VERY GOOD story. Please continue the story line and post more chapters!

Love this story. My all time favorite. Please write another like it

I have yet to be disappointed by your stories. Nice job.

Great short story Write more!

Please write another like it

Never thought I could get off on one page but I sure did. So well writen, how do you do it!

Hot and nicely written

More please