All Comments on 'The Break-Up Ch. 03 - The Journey'

Thanks for this strange but entrancing story. Very sensual and sexual but very intriguing as well. 5* Will now have to read all your offerings. Drew

Loved this next chapter to your "Journey". I liked that it was not a simple "dirty story" as many are here but had substance, emotion, and depth. I have enjoyed all of your work and look forward to more.

A near perfect balance of eroticism and storytelling.

I found reading this story a very moving experience. Very well written and touched me emotionally as well as erotically. I am learning more and more about my self as well. Thank you.

I loved the story and it took me through so many emotional states. I learned a lot about myself. I also found that listening to some beautiful classical music enhances the deeply emotionally feelings.