All Comments on 'The Breaking of a Maid'

Love it, thank you

Only on page three and this story has already earned five stars. Love the story and can't wait to finish!

Remember to add the chastity tag in the future! It's rather popular and I would've missed this story if I wasn't already following you.

Lots of effort in this one; the song at the end really sealed the deal for the quality of your work.

I wish this continued!!!

''Mostly femdom but with some male-male sex.'' I felt like this was pretty missleading. The majority of the sex acts where done between men, if anything. While the strapon bit was blown past in the majority of the female/male sex acts. The one act where the strapon play had any sort of heft was at the begining. There was

also a bit of cunnilingus, but, not as much as I'd hoped for...at least in contrast to all the male/male sex acts. Now, you might say something along the lines of ''yh but like, the MC stops being a male! So it doesn't count! They're female now!'' except...he's constantly being refered to by male pronoun, while sometimes, as an act to humiliate him, they give him a female pronoun. So, if the story itself doesn't consider him female, why should I?

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2/5 for the missleading sentence at the begining and not enough strapon play.