All Comments on 'The Bride'

It already seemed scary, but the sharing of the wife tipped it over the line for me. What a horrid culture (I mean ISIS style, not the broader culture, I am sure there are many decent people in it).

That was one of the best I've read in a while. Need a whole series on this and a prequel for when the mum came into the family. Keep up the good work.

Story was suggested by finding out about a guy I know sharing his arranged bride with his brother. Pictures seen to confirm it was true. Add some imagination and we have what we have. Part 2 ending with the girls getting gangbanged? Why not...

Is there any chance of a follow up where he takes her ass like he said?

The story is hot. But let's keep it as fantasy. Cause I cant even point out where is the wrong in this. Poor girls. Anyway story is so good.

And that's the tension isn't it Amy?

The story is wrong on many levels but somehow that makes it better!

I have sent you a contact explaining...

I have played around with a second part, might finish it one day.

Hot, but two short. Could have spilled over at least a page or at least 1/2 a page more. Also would love a part two.