by sherryjones
putting in Gwen's awakening in Nebraska is a nice, creative touch to the unfolding story. Blending it in with the other 'fortunates' is truly creative.
whorestristic
I found this story very gripping and liked the way Gwen's past experiences blended in with current life events
Why is this in the BDSM category??? It’s just creepy as fuck, there’s a special dose of karma reserved for women who manipulate others into the sex trade/ human trafficking. The whole thing made me want to puke. It might evolve into something consensual later but right now it’s a steaming pile of shit.
Wow, this poor girl has really shitty luck. Presumably this is events leading up to chapter 1? Honestly who ties someone up with twine? Oh right desperate teenage boys who want to fuck that’s who.
Still waiting for sexy times but not holding my breath