by JimBob44
Romance in all of its many stages. A good start of a promising story, very well thought out and written. I look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Warning: Ends with bloody violence and lots of senseless death. If this upsets you, like it does me, be warned.
Ok, this is absolutely great stuff!! Still getting used to the switching between couples but it has the added benefit of not getting bored reading a long segment on characters I might not be interested in. Bookmarked and ready for the next chapter, write on! :)
Great character development, a lot of people makes it a bit confusing, but more interesting in the long run I assume.
It was a very cute story and I can't wait to read the rest.
love the story but you use the same names or simular names so it got a little confusing