All Comments on 'The Brown Bag'

This should be a series.

Yeah I'd love this to be a series, I want to see Rhiannon get a happy ending

Thank you so much for reading and rating (more ratings would be lovely and I'd love to get feedback from people who rated low as to what they didn't like.)

Regarding this as a series, it's totally possible! In some ways, it already is as it takes place within the same setting as my previous story "Space Debris" though it features completely different characters.

Have a read if you're interested!

https://www.literotica.com/s/space-debris

It's weird how erotic stories are often more imaginative sci-fi than mainstream sci-fi stories. Love your stuff, keep up the great work!

Really imaginative world building and characters. Gritty realism and characters that feel alive make for a great story! Love to see more from this line.