All Comments on 'The Bully Beaten'

In the immortal lyrics from Disney's Hercules, "Zero to Hero, in no time flat. Zero to Hero, just like that (Finger snap)"!

I'll give your story 5 stars because the entitled kid, Austin, got what was coming to him. But I didn't like that Shawn in the end showed himself to be just as as big an asshole as Austin.

Damn I loved this!

BOOM! Straight into the favorites bin.

Another great fantasy. Thanks Jasmine.

Liked this story, nice change from your usual because the protagonist got himself the win instead of humiliation, and he did it for a good cause for others. Also the lack of race stuff was refreshing, would read more

Yessss, I love your Nerdy guy dominating the bigger jock stories!

Only sorry you said he went into politics, no respect for them !

It was a good story and liked it all but for the last paragraph where Shawn turned into the same entitled asshole with his ambitions and elitist attitude as Austin was

I was surprised at how much I enjoyed this story, Jasmine. I don't usually look at the gay male section. But I'm always ready to read one of the stories your deliciously filthy imagination has thought of. And I have to say, I wasn't disappointed. In a real turn about, I read this aloud to my cuckold. He isn't gay, but he has been taught to suck cock, and he has, on occasions, been man fucked too. It was so amusing to see his little boi clit twitching in his cute silicon sheath. He's not due to be milked till next Saturday (it's Sunday here today), so he's got a whole week of frustration to get through. I'll be reading this story to him every night this week! For helping me to tease and torment my cuck, I give this 5 stars and my grateful thanks for writing it.

a nice surprising story. i like the way you show the players and like the situation and your writing. show how imaginative you are

thanks

This was a nice surprise return to the Gay Male section for you... until I read it. I find it underwhelming and short on the unique heat that drove your previous stories (but then again, you literally wrote that you don't find LGBT men hot in your love life, so why should we expect you to write them hotly here?). Also, as a Black man, thank you for excluding racially fetishising dynamics.

thanks for the gay and anal tags, saved me some time this morning.

Sequel pls?

A powerful story of the defeat of a bully and an arousing sorry of a strong bi-sexual man! Loved it!

Awesome scenario, can't wait to read it later. I recently rpd a similar scenario, so very excited to read this!

kindly post Becoming a Lesbian Slave Ch. 04 .Waiting for it

Hot story, well written, but seems like the nudity was an add on, not really Nude Day? I get the explanation, but it's a stretch! Still enjoyed it! :-)

Love the bi sex!

644. Excellent story, but I can’t believe the “King” was so arrogant that he didn’t realize the shrimp had a surprise awaiting, but otherwise it was an interesting twist of a story with both boy fuck and ending with girl fuck and continuing life superiority. I’d like to see more of the escapades with the bully’s sister that led to later successes.

Interesting story. It's a good job the hero kept his cool. So, I was wondering, is the tradition finished at that school? He might not fuck his parents in law? But I'd be interested in sequel? I don't think he'd use his dick to work his way up the ladder. But there's always an idiot waiting in the shadow waiting to take him on.

Last couple of paragraphs were just silly. Would have been better to stop earlier and punish a part two detailing Austin's family coming to town and being forced to submit to their new masters.

Thế ending was silly and stupid.