All Comments on 'The Bunker Ch. 10'

Great chapter. This will get several re-reads from me. You are such a great writer. I'm glad you like smut. Lol

Mostly really enjoying the story.

Though as someone who also doesn’t like tattoos. I detest big colourful pictures, but simple/small black words aren’t that noticeable or bad and are much better. Colourful tattoos look awful after they stretch and the color fades. Black outlines and text age much better and are much less noticeable.

It seems like the main character (who “doesn’t like tattoos”) refused some small writing & instead insisted on quite large, multi piece colorful drawings instead…. What?

I expected him to change her slave tattoo into a more discreet slave tattoo. Instead he gave them big, garish, colourful real full tattoos!?!? That makes no sense and just seems like he’s put a big ugly mark on them that’s worse than the original suggestion she had herself,

Believe it or not, I was missing this series enough that I just reread the entire thing this weekend. Then less than a day after finishing you post a new chapter. Thank you.

@Anon. You got the size backwards. The words Destiny would have put on herself would have been large and bold. Kevin went with small images. Please also note the significance of those images. Three cherries is a 'win' on a slot machine -- Kevin is lucky to have these ladies in his life. The 'lips on the ass' tattoo comes straight from his profile in Ch 1.

I'm imagining his slaves kneeling around the bed at night-

"Now I lay me down to sleep,

I hope my Master fucks me deep.

If not now, before I wake,

I beg that he my ass will take."

Seriously, I am enjoying the mystery of the leak. Probably somebody that joined the House of Kevin after he got on the BA radar, but the BA might be bribing or coercing anybody with threats or promises against their family in other states or something, just to get information. Or the children of the guy Kevin killed could be the leak. Or Ellie could be chatting to one of her girlfriends. Or maybe the Asian doctor doesn't think Kevin is really treating them like slaves. The more I think about it, the more possibilities I see.

Thanks, Ronan! Keep up the great work.

I love both of these series. Quaranteam and The Bunker.

awesome chapter, as usual, thanks. In the back of my mind is a niggiling thought they Kevin and his family may get shut out of the bunker and have to take refuge in the house...5/5

Such a great read !